As will be mentioned time and time again, this story has not been edited in the slightest. Not for content, continuity, spelling, anything. It is a completely raw story, and so errors will occur on the regular. If you have any sort of constructive feedback, please let me know either here or via Facebook, Twitter, etc. as I would like to eventually revise the story into a cohesive novella of sorts for later publication.
Thank you all for your comments and support! Nothing you do goes unnoticed.